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Take (Free verse) by savagelymakeitcount
With coffee-stained teeth, Wrung out, strung out; I stared at your Barely legal Regal Singularity. I whispered, “I love you.” Thrilling, stimulating; were your thoughts Fucking my binded mind inside and out. You said nothing. My cock busy, dizzy in your mouth or salaciousness cattiness lazy exhales of stolidity. “What is love but an obsession?” I coerced with frustration, “Then life isn’t worth it.” “Then prove it.” Scared, I knew I couldn’t. So with coffee-stained teeth Wrung out, strung out; I give my last reverence, bitter tears to you, My dear Faustian waste of exquisite beauty.

Up the ladder: Silly sickness
Down the ladder: An Infection in the Brain

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8640
Posted: October 15, 2005 5:47 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2005 5:47 PM PDT
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