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Take (Free verse) by savagelymakeitcount
With coffee-stained teeth,
Wrung out, strung out;
I stared at your
Barely legal
Regal
Singularity.
I whispered, âI love you.â
Thrilling, stimulating;
were your thoughts
Fucking my binded
mind
inside and out.
You said nothing. My cock
busy, dizzy
in your mouth
or salaciousness
cattiness
lazy exhales of stolidity.
âWhat is love but an obsession?â
I coerced with frustration,
âThen life isnât worth it.â
âThen prove it.â
Scared, I knew
I couldnât.
So with coffee-stained teeth
Wrung out, strung out;
I give my last reverence,
bitter tears to you,
My dear Faustian waste
of exquisite beauty.
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Posted: October 15, 2005 5:47 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2005 5:47 PM PDT
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