poemranker ::Life by imnotgoodatpoetry

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Free verse № 132060

Life

Member since 2005 · Posted 13 Oct 2005 · 0 comments

Here in new york I have the life A world free of stress and strife Traffic jams all the time, every day Then I make it to work In a ten by ten space I must stay Go home, in a traffic jam still Get home to the usual stack of bills Go to bed in my tiny apartment that I can’t afford And get up and do it some more Yup, I got the life Free of stress and strife

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