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Free verse № 132055

Fly Away

Member since 2005 · Posted 13 Oct 2005 · 0 comments

A stream of love into the sky no more life of love or happiness i say i love u but u dont feel the same my heart drians from sadness of the broken heart u have given me far away in my own world there are hurtful words and that means i cant be down the sky of beautiful colors brings me back to life where adventures run free but the color of the gray clouds pur down to ruin my one day of happiness emptiness cannot be fixed except for the smile of my love i see him him there with a laugh and look that wont be forgotton but cant seem to get close to him

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