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Fly Away (Free verse) by BrAnDiLoVesYoU
A stream of love into the sky no more life of love or happiness i say i love u but u dont feel the same my heart drians from sadness of the broken heart u have given me far away in my own world there are hurtful words and that means i cant be down the sky of beautiful colors brings me back to life where adventures run free but the color of the gray clouds pur down to ruin my one day of happiness emptiness cannot be fixed except for the smile of my love i see him him there with a laugh and look that wont be forgotton but cant seem to get close to him

Up the ladder: Negative
Down the ladder: Writers Block

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10747
Posted: October 13, 2005 4:34 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2005 4:34 PM PDT
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