Free verse № 132034

Was Everyone Put On This Earth For A Reason

Member since 2005 · Posted 13 Oct 2005 · Edited 15 Oct 2005 · 5 comments

why were we put on this earth just to step foot on the turf do we actually serve a purpose in life or is it like gambling were we take risks and roll the dice maybe everyone is suppose to accomplish something great and the ones that succeeded believe in there fate we've all had atleast one chance but some people are to wrapped up in the dance they need to open their eyes to see what a great person they can be some people are to afraid to open their eyes and if they don't they won't realize that everyone is great in their own way you just need to say that tomarrow might be your lucky day

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[n/a] ALChemy 14-Oct-05/5:49 AM Reply

We were put here to make plastic. Now that that's been done the earth has decided to exterminate us via tsunami, hurricanes and the bird flu.

[n/a] Niphredil 14-Oct-05/11:38 AM Reply

Please, check your spelling and grammar. I've counted at least 10 problems that need to be fixed (and that's including words like don't and won't which should really be apostrophized).

[4] oneglove 14-Oct-05/2:56 PM Reply

yeah the spelling and grammer is a big problem, it's distracting from the rest of the poem, which is alright.

[1] Tintagiles 16-Oct-05/10:32 PM Reply

We were put on this earth to fertilise it with our bodies once we are dead.

[10] zodiac 17-Oct-05/1:39 AM Reply

We weren't put here, we just all happened to be here at roughly the same time.