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Was Everyone Put On This Earth For A Reason (Free verse) by cabot why were we put on this earth
just to step foot on the turf
do we actually serve a purpose in life
or is it like gambling were we take risks and roll the dice
maybe everyone is suppose to accomplish something great
and the ones that succeeded believe in there fate
we've all had atleast one chance
but some people are to wrapped up in the dance
they need to open their eyes to see
what a great person they can be
some people are to afraid to open their eyes
and if they don't they won't realize
that everyone is great in their own way
you just need to say
that tomarrow might be your lucky day
Up the ladder:
autumn angst
Down the ladder:
hall panful
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Posted: October 13, 2005 2:19 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2005 3:11 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7317934 Overall Rank: 11764 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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14-Oct-05/5:49 AM
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We were put here to make plastic. Now that that's been done the earth has decided to exterminate us via tsunami, hurricanes and the bird flu.
Please, check your spelling and grammar. I've counted at least 10 problems that need to be fixed (and that's including words like don't and won't which should really be apostrophized).
yeah the spelling and grammer is a big problem, it's distracting from the rest of the poem, which is alright.
We were put on this earth to fertilise it with our bodies once we are dead.
We weren't put here, we just all happened to be here at roughly the same time.
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