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Keep on Going (Free verse) by april fool We cannot control the wind.
We can only control our sails.
So patch up your yacht and try again.
(Get a speedboat if all else fails!)
Up the ladder:
Heart and Soul
Down the ladder:
Lust, and the Sad Soul
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Posted: October 9, 2005 2:20 PM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2005 2:20 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.72186 Overall Rank: 11919 Comments:
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Dovina @ 209.247.222.94
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9-Oct-05/6:38 PM
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The conclusion does not follow from the premise.
ok, will do. So, now take this advice and write yourself another poem.
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