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From Afar (Prose Poem) by ObsequiousGem
Here, where you dream, I watch you sleep, I watch you lay in silence, you breathe so deep, I know you well, everyday I've seen you succeed, I may even love you, and I know it's me you need. I am your protector, everyday I watch over you, I am a shadow, following your every move, it's true, You are beautiful, my bright silver gem in the night, I challenge the world, for I will win every fight. I have no purpose here, other than to be close by, I don't want to lose you, I would only wish to die, You yearn for me, I feel it from within your soul, To have me as yours, I know this is your one goal. Before the first days light, I move to watch you from afar, Every morning I know you see me, for I am the last star, You look for me, wanting me more and more each day, I want this too, but many laws I must continue to obey. I promise you that someday, I will be a part of your life, More than just a shadow, I will have you as my wife, Until then my lover, I will watch over you each moment, I cherish your moves, the time together that we've spent. Just before you open the windows to your soul, your eyes, I leave you for a simple moment, each piece of me inside dies, I vow that we will be one soon, I swear it won't be too long, My heart will never change, I know you will remain strong.

Up the ladder: secert love
Down the ladder: inadequate

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12156
Posted: October 9, 2005 1:58 AM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2005 1:58 AM PDT
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