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Overwhelming Vulnerability (Free verse) by lil_miss_kittie
Soft silky, delicious open, Whispers desire, Secret thread, Your soul will be found uncaring. Tender, hoping loving, stroking, Wicked gasps, Untold thoughts, Your heart will be found unweaving. Faster plunging, heartbeat racing, Deeper yearnings, Almost there, Your mind will be found unyielding.

Up the ladder: I Never Thought
Down the ladder: Upon a Wooden Cross

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9979
Posted: October 6, 2005 5:31 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2005 5:31 PM PDT
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