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Overwhelming Vulnerability (Free verse) by lil_miss_kittie Soft silky, delicious open,
Whispers desire,
Secret thread,
Your soul will be found uncaring.
Tender, hoping loving, stroking,
Wicked gasps,
Untold thoughts,
Your heart will be found unweaving.
Faster plunging, heartbeat racing,
Deeper yearnings,
Almost there,
Your mind will be found unyielding.
Up the ladder:
o, whale
Down the ladder:
Ransom
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Posted: October 6, 2005 5:31 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2005 5:31 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8814354 Overall Rank: 9985 139 view(s)
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