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coins (Free verse) by Dental Panic
I'm on my way to Rome to see the paintings of Caravaggio in the San Luigi dei Francesi I am not sure if there is a God but a small prayer will do no harm - keep you modest and humane - they have a box there in which you must put a coin to turn the lights on I am not sure if beauty is eternal but for the time being some small change can be bliss

Up the ladder: Lick up your ears
Down the ladder: Angel Cager

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.25
Weighted score: 5.5066123
Overall Rank: 2652
Posted: September 26, 2005 2:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2005 2:44 PM PDT
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[10] FireFly747 @ 68.98.56.123 | 4-Jan-07/4:05 PM | Reply
A priceless poem you have here. Loose pocket change is always a plus in this modern age. Life revolves around "The Coin" A superbly written piece. Keep sharing.
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