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From Dust To Flesh To Texas (Free verse) by Caducus
Safe within the ultra-scan
I was barely visible
Asleep in a manger
Until Herod killed me
With ten latex swords.
After I was born
I was barely visible
Sour breasts from a sweet Mother
Who sang of a Mocking Bird
That never came.
When I was twelve
my Dad showed me Jesus
but I saw a carpenter
dying on a cross he carved?
So I could be forgiven
For pending sins.
When I was twelve
My God was born in Texas
She weighed two pounds four ounces
And crucified my devils
By the time I was thirty.
Some babies are born old
They have lived a hundred lives
Searching to be found
And dying lost
For they were alive to be dead again.
I have loved her always
From dust to flesh to Texas
And now I have a home in her
The door is locked
But I am visible.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5300
Posted: September 23, 2005 1:23 AM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2005 1:23 AM PDT
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