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The Box (Free verse) by Eydn
Silent and still, I hear the wind.
It drifts upon my face
And smells how rotten fruit taste.
Water drips into mouth.
I lick my lips.
Only to taste the clay of the earth
And the wood of this box.
Air is sacred here.
I gasp for it,
As I lay separated and serene.
I scream, but no one hears me.
Above me a shiny silver speculum
Display bloodshot globes glistening.
This can't be me; I still live.
Please someone hear me cry,
I just let another breath of air slip by.
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Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10393
Posted: September 23, 2005 12:46 AM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2005 12:46 AM PDT
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