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I blink (Free verse) by srh
I blink And black blinks back My eyes are open Will not open Who snuck in And sewed them shut? Was it you Whose cunning fingers Twisted tendrils Not yet thought And spoke so sweetly Thoughts made me Dumbly do this deed unseen?

Up the ladder: smoke is rising
Down the ladder: The Cold

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9971
Posted: September 2, 2005 6:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2005 6:44 PM PDT
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