Free verse № 130215
that explains it
she wound her way through roots and limbs
and all around the leaves,
and travelled through the tiny water droplets
borne by the wind.
whistled through a crack in a cavern
and climbed up a ladder of moss,
skipping swiftly through the grass
of my unkempt front lawn.
she wormed her way through a knot hole
in a plank of my attic walls.
and down through the dusty ducts
of my inactive central heating and air.
sucked through my nose as i slept,
up into my brain,
she danced quite exactly the same
in my dreams
as she danced through the night before.
2 comments
It would help if you cleaned up the capitalization, and puncuation. At 'whistled' is not a start of a sentence, but you end with a period. I have been informed that to begin a sentence with And is okay. sucked through my nose as I slept, is not a complete sentence either. I am not very strong in puncuation usuage, but I suppose you could leave it out altogether, or get some help with it.
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