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Plastic Ideals (Free verse) by Nuit Fake plastic Ideals,
For catchy obsessions.
Commercial handouts,
With capitalist intentions.
Nothing but redemption,
for angry politicians.
As there minds spin around
In contradiction.
Money in a corporate structure,
Balance power.
As a greed towards wealth,
Pop culture.
In our integrity,
We momentarily,
Generalise, criticize,
To blinded system.
Up the ladder:
Moments (or) Suicide
Down the ladder:
The world today.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Posted: July 2, 2005 11:14 AM PDT; Last modified: July 2, 2005 11:14 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9624 Comments:
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Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 71.130.57.58
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3-Jul-05/9:46 PM
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I couldn't follow this.
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Nuit @ 86.128.161.224
> Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
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4-Jul-05/5:32 AM
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Ok, it is a bit random, thought it sounded good at the time though!
"I liked your poem!"
The Home Depot: You can do it, We can help TM
Thanx!
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