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Plastic Ideals

Member since 2005 · Posted 2 Jul 2005 · 4 comments

Fake plastic Ideals, For catchy obsessions. Commercial handouts, With capitalist intentions. Nothing but redemption, for angry politicians. As there minds spin around In contradiction. Money in a corporate structure, Balance power. As a greed towards wealth, Pop culture. In our integrity, We momentarily, Generalise, criticize, To blinded system.

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[2] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 3-Jul-05/9:46 PM Reply
I couldn't follow this.
[n/a] Nuit › Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 4-Jul-05/5:32 AM Reply
Ok, it is a bit random, thought it sounded good at the time though!
[9] T. Jonathron Remp 22-Jul-05/12:57 PM Reply
"I liked your poem!"

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[n/a] Nuit › T. Jonathron Remp 23-Jul-05/2:03 AM Reply
Thanx!