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you suck (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
monsters sleep in the middle,
you know, that spot where the riddle ends
and we think "goddamnit, what's the answer?"
you know, when it's finally got your attention.
so you think and you think
and chunk all your reason
into slabs to conquer this silly
party-favor,
all the while
fully unaware
that it has captured you fully.
and those monsters in the middle
feast upon your entrails,
it never fails,
caught up in a stupid moment
waiting for a punchline to poke up
its head in the midst of the torment,
"haha," you laugh, "i've finally found it.
she fell in a hole and the piano's her soul."
damn you sound like an idiot.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10411
Posted: July 1, 2005 1:23 AM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2005 1:25 AM PDT
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