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Drama (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
You said, I said He said, She said Your misunderstanding Of an interpretation Words flung from my mouth Diving into your ears You said, I said He said, She said Hearing rumors from everyone But the person who said it Letting it effect the way you are Unto others around you You heard, I heard He heard, She heard Words you thought I said Trapped deep within my head You're mad at me For what I never said You heard, I heard He heard, She heard You thought I said one thing Yet he heard another She told you And you told him He told me And now there's drama

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11307
Posted: June 23, 2005 7:02 PM PDT; Last modified: June 23, 2005 7:02 PM PDT
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[5] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 23-Jun-05/7:11 PM | Reply
Could be said in half the words and be stronger.
[n/a] QuirkyWonder @ 24.9.35.202 > Dovina | 23-Jun-05/7:14 PM | Reply
Drama is never short and sweet ;)
[5] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 > QuirkyWonder | 23-Jun-05/7:17 PM | Reply
But good poetry about drama is. :-)
[5] Blue Magpie @ 212.205.251.47 | 23-Jun-05/11:31 PM | Reply
I would agree with Dovina
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