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Release (Free verse) by Miracle
Feelings that were felt today
we shared not what was there
the love for you i had is gone
I thought that i had wounded you
yet long ago those scars had healed
in place of them the apathy
unbeknownst to me
I labored in the darkened shaft
i toiled beneath the earth
fool's gold- false hope was all that i could find
blinded by it's luster
I fed my lies
they fed on me and tore away my pain
catch up and beat me down again until i realize
i cannot lose what i never had
deluded by these lies
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10759
Posted: June 22, 2005 1:30 AM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2005 1:30 AM PDT
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