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Fly (Haiku) by mikejedw
Fly on my ankle Faces me, faces away A twitch and he's gone
Up the ladder: Jerk ?? Circle
Down the ladder: Why Work?
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1904764
Weighted score: 6.169064
Overall Rank: 1022
Posted: May 10, 2002 8:13 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 8:13 AM PDT
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[10] hoopoe @ 62.254.32.4 | 19-May-02/3:26 AM | Reply
got it! great! a jewel, what a model, in 17 syllables you capture the whole of the being of this fly
and the difference from you - and there's a smile in it!!
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