poemranker ::Fly by mikejedw

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Haiku № 1274

Fly

by mikejedw

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 1 comment

Fly on my ankle Faces me, faces away A twitch and he's gone

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[10] hoopoe 19-May-02/3:26 AM Reply
got it! great! a jewel, what a model, in 17 syllables you capture the whole of the being of this fly
and the difference from you - and there's a smile in it!!