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Fly (Haiku) by mikejedw

Fly on my ankle Faces me, faces away A twitch and he's gone

hoopoe 19-May-02/3:26 AM
got it! great! a jewel, what a model, in 17 syllables you capture the whole of the being of this fly
and the difference from you - and there's a smile in it!!




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