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Free verse № 1270

Flying

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 2 comments

Have had an odd series of dreams since last we spoke. Always Flying always falling. Wondering what this means in the Grand scheme of things, Sudden falls through the pine trees Picket fences, out of tumbling cars Being flung by circumstance from cliffs Passing Wile E. Coyote and anvils on the way To a small --spack-- and tiny cloud of dust. There is no fear, only exhilaration Anticipating the unknown while relishing the prospect Of new horizons.

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[7] deleted user 10-Jul-02/10:09 AM Reply
You shoudl read "the Gryphon and Sabine" books, your language reminded me of those books.
[8] <~> 14-Aug-02/6:49 AM Reply
yes. yes.