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this pain

Member since 2005 · Posted 10 Jun 2005 · 1 comment

This pain, it feels so real a pain I've never had to feel The emptiness is over taking me and I don't know any other way to be you were my everything even though it was only for awhile I would have gave anything to see your smile Every thought of you seems to be driving me insane How am I supposed to deal with this pain.

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[1] deleted user 10-Jun-05/7:04 AM Reply
And one more mind-boggling look into the complicated spiritual innards of the tormented adolescent. My cup runneth over