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this pain (Free verse) by eliznhaz This pain, it feels so real
a pain I've never had to feel
The emptiness is over taking me
and I don't know any other way to be
you were my everything even though it was only for awhile
I would have gave anything to see your smile
Every thought of you seems to be driving me insane
How am I supposed to deal with this pain.
Up the ladder:
The Right to Life
Down the ladder:
Going Blind
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Posted: June 10, 2005 4:54 AM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2005 4:54 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.3585887 Overall Rank: 3342 Comments:
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10-Jun-05/7:04 AM
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And one more mind-boggling look into the complicated spiritual innards of the tormented adolescent. My cup runneth over
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