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this pain (Free verse) by eliznhaz

This pain, it feels so real a pain I've never had to feel The emptiness is over taking me and I don't know any other way to be you were my everything even though it was only for awhile I would have gave anything to see your smile Every thought of you seems to be driving me insane How am I supposed to deal with this pain.

DoubleU 10-Jun-05/7:04 AM
And one more mind-boggling look into the complicated spiritual innards of the tormented adolescent. My cup runneth over




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