poemranker ::q.e.d. by sunsolid

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Free verse № 1266

q.e.d.

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 2 comments

thick fingers drum along formica, flesh padded sound roundrunrounds the room the art of waiting is necessitated, never willed, never wanted, but birthed by circumstance and blighted by inconvenience he draws out a stare, as a thin and wispy sigh; here is purpose, the reason only untoward (whispered for posterity) waiting moves past him ending baits you and now... all once ashen, now piss clear

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[7] ErgoErgun 13-May-02/12:17 AM Reply
Not bad bud.
I like the math reference: Quod Erat Demonstradum
[10] anonymous 17-May-02/12:33 PM Reply
about burning man?