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q.e.d. (Free verse) by sunsolid
thick fingers drum along formica, flesh padded sound roundrunrounds the room the art of waiting is necessitated, never willed, never wanted, but birthed by circumstance and blighted by inconvenience he draws out a stare, as a thin and wispy sigh; here is purpose, the reason only untoward (whispered for posterity) waiting moves past him ending baits you and now... all once ashen, now piss clear

Up the ladder: Autophage
Down the ladder: Curry Gives You The Shits

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.625
Weighted score: 4.669701
Overall Rank: 12220
Posted: May 10, 2002 7:38 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 7:38 AM PDT
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[7] ErgoErgun @ 216.144.194.247 | 13-May-02/12:17 AM | Reply
Not bad bud.
I like the math reference: Quod Erat Demonstradum
[10]... anonymous @ 66.124.10.227 | 17-May-02/12:33 PM | Reply
about burning man?
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