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Up Close at a Distance (Free verse) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
Does she know how my heart pounds
when I see her far down the path
the sway of her hips giving her away
before I even see her face
a toss of her hair, she looks at the trees
I know it's her, I feel it in my throat
I feel her glowing from a distance
radiant~pressing~dissonant~infinite
Frisbee and a smile float my way
Your groove explodes across my
Vision blurring with each quick flick
Of a wrist trained to fling the disc
Your lithe grace catches in my throat
You move with subtle ease. Style
Is your native tongue.
The smile I keep just for You
is out, and in use. I feel
trust...distress...flames...and peace.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8848
Posted: June 7, 2005 2:21 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2005 12:23 AM PDT
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