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As the Flowers Bloom (Free verse) by nothingtoanyone Bee my nectar,
You drank from my womb.
Bee my heart,
Pierced by your sting.
Bee my eyes,
Reflections of your you.
Bee my love,
Be your death.
Bee my beginning,
Be your end.
Bee my painful cry,
Be your last words.
Be forever mine,
Bee just be mine.
Up the ladder:
Love Lie's In Misery
Down the ladder:
Still Alone
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Posted: May 24, 2005 11:11 AM PDT; Last modified: June 7, 2005 4:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9125 Comments:
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deleted user @ 81.69.23.196
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24-May-05/1:13 PM
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A *9* for daring to be original
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deleted user @ 81.69.23.196
> deleted user
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7-Jun-05/4:16 PM
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That was then. I've matured since. Still good for a *7*
Are you a drone in love with a female worker. They have no interest in the likes of you as they bring home the nectar while you loaf about the hive.
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