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Wish You Were Here (Other) by mystic enoch
The funniest thing happened the other day, After I sent my child out to play. As I sat at the window I started to see beautiful images. In my mind I knew I was dreaming in that boy I saw you, it was soul redeeming. It assured me that part of you was still in the world with me. Those images started racing back at me. At that time it was you all I could see. It made me think everything was ok. My love for you will always be there. At that window I just stared into empty space. Wish you were here.

Up the ladder: Beyond Redemption
Down the ladder: black boat blues

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9167
Posted: May 21, 2005 5:06 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2005 5:06 PM PDT
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[7] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 7-Mar-06/2:57 PM | Reply
I actually quite like this...not original, but sweet nonetheless. As Mr. M. Stipe once said, sweetness follows.

PS - Bollocks to Internet Exploder for repeatedly screwing up as I'm posting comments...
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