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Disturbances of air (Free verse) by ingwa
I wonder through the bush
Stifling heat makes me drip
Slight breeze in the air
Cools my brow, chills my skin
It blows and strokes my cheek
Knows the places it must seek
The coolness calms I am meek
The pores on my body stop their leak
Erodes mountains, bald and great
Moves the earth this way and that
Lifts the birds, pushes their wings
Carries the sounds from afar
The wind has a mind of its own
Comes and goes as it chooses
Currents rise and fall, blow and sway
A great creation from the Mother herself
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9161
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2005 2:30 PM PDT
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