poemranker ::All's fair by Adriaan

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Free verse № 1244

All's fair

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 1 comment

Sadness weighs me down I walk like a little lead soldier slow and heavy My thoughts are sluggish and circular they orbit my sorrow never escaping the gravity of the situation Defeat has come before the battle I can not fight my love in any way I can not fight for my love against her desire

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[7] flatliner 15-Jul-02/8:29 AM Reply
i like the picture it painted for me