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All's fair (Free verse) by Adriaan Sadness weighs me down
I walk like a little lead soldier
slow and heavy
My thoughts are sluggish and circular
they orbit my sorrow
never escaping
the gravity of the situation
Defeat has come before the battle
I can not fight my love
in any way
I can not fight for my love
against her desire
Up the ladder:
Lamb of God
Down the ladder:
The Sea
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Posted: May 10, 2002 5:12 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 5:12 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.8752944 Overall Rank: 13452 Comments:
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flatliner @ 64.175.99.26
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15-Jul-02/8:29 AM
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i like the picture it painted for me
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