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Get Out Of My Life (Free verse) by Brittanyy
I once was so happy, living my life, Free of all sorrow, pain , and strife. But then you came along and fucked with my head, and played with my emotions, just to get me in bed. You hurt me so bad and now these wounds just wont heal. Love isn't a game to me. This pain is real. You totally disregarded the way that I felt. Whenever you looked at me my heart would melt. I was like a love sick puppy, always chasing you around. But once I gave you my all of my heart you stomped it into the ground. You saw the hurt in my eyes but you just didn't care. After all that I've done for you, this just isn't fair! Now you say that you're sorry, and you didn't mean to hurt me, you say you want me back and you really do care about me. I really didn't ask for much all I wanted was for you to love me, but you were too busy holding every other girl above me. Now it's too late for us, but I will forgive. Just get out of my life and let me live.

Up the ladder: Boston
Down the ladder: nicholson

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7452
Posted: May 1, 2005 1:37 AM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2005 1:37 AM PDT
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[4] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 4.224.87.95 | 3-May-05/2:29 PM | Reply
"Pimple" Look up the defintion in poem types. -4- until it gets the right classification.

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