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"Home" (Free verse) by Dreamer
She echoes over the valleys, fields
and beyond the boundaries of life itsef
A resounding whiper which treads a silver line
through the heart of the one soul listenig.
Words of truth and question creep on the
carpet of the righteous and the striving.
The cherry blossom buds of may fall like tears
Tears of those awake and those asleep.
She shivers on the grass of goodness and purity.
A icy chill streams across the lake where the
swan will glide and the duck will rise.
The blue moon rests on the stars of the unliving
while the skies open to the heavens.
She cries to the "other":Where art thou?
A gentle voice,so close, replies:
"Home"
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9548
Posted: August 31, 2002 1:57 PM PDT; Last modified: August 31, 2002 1:57 PM PDT
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