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Boulder Lake, Somewhere in Wisconsin (Free verse) by jessicazee
You said weâd go to the little lake on the res.
Youâd know the right site, the two trees,
the private beach, the wasp nest,
where you saw the owl, a skunk ignored you,
the beer you already got, that many mushrooms
is all you said weâd need.
Drive your red truck to Elkhorn
past Hales Corners where you shopped
for backpacks, sleeping bags, rain hats
at Sherperâs, Army surplus and camouflage.
I still think Iâd take care of the fire
while you made the tent livable;
cut green wood for hot dogs, gathered
kindling and fallen logs.
I would burn the first flame
even though yours would burn faster,
hotter, more inside the pit we dug together.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5926
Posted: April 11, 2005 11:47 PM PDT; Last modified: April 11, 2005 11:47 PM PDT
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