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Perfect Answer

Member since 2005 · Posted 10 Apr 2005 · Edited 10 Apr 2005 · 4 comments

We heard about the incident where this college student, for his final Philosophy paper, was asked to answer the question: Why? After much deliberation, he put down, only, “Because.” and received a perfect grade That made us all slow down a little. I pitted the answer against everything: The freshly clipped grass around one soldier’s grave, Mandelbrot’s fractals, A sycamore tree forming new buds, while on one aloof point, hung a single, shriveled leaf that never fell. I stood it up carefully to face the ghostly moon, then realized that the lonely wraith was me, stalking reasons in the silver light The Truth: unfathomable, and yet there are clues everywhere Perhaps it is right inside my body, inundated like those birds who turn on the first bitter day, wings acquiescing to a token cadence: Be—cause Be—cause

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[8] zodiac 12-Apr-05/6:10 AM Reply
Were you in a Philosophy class when you heard that?

Do you believe "Because" answers the question "Why?"
[10] Goad › zodiac 18-Apr-05/3:23 PM Reply
not that it answers it, but that reflect all you want it's the best answer you're getting.
[8] Dovina 12-Apr-05/7:43 AM Reply
The last two lines change from contemplative to didactic. That is if you mean "Be cause." If that's what you want to do, and I hope is is not, then transition needed.
[10] Goad › Dovina 18-Apr-05/3:21 PM Reply
how do you get the didacticicism when the line before is "ACQUIESCing to a TOKEN cadence?" Since you know what didactic means, I have to assume you know what "acquiesce" & "token" mean -- does the suggestion that the birds' whole existence is helpless surrender to a rote living out of patterns for which there isn't a rational, external logical answer but which is a priori & pervasive not rule out for you the idea that the narrator is didactically urging us to "be cause"??????? <scratches head and looks disgruntled>