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Shatter Into You (Free verse) by AtomIcPromIse
Every time you touch me,
I want to fall into a pile of dust,
And blow away with one big gust,
Your hands scorch me when they touch my skin,
Soak it all down with a bottle of gin,
Repressing all my hate,
Ever since our first date!
I know youâll never see this,
And I wonât tell-
That when Iâm around you,
I feel like Iâm in hell.
Youâre not so attractive,
In a way you canât see,
I know you better than yourself,
Youâre not much better than me.
Iâm just a catastrophe,
And youâre my tragedy,
I canât hold on, I canât hold onâ¦
I canât hold on to something I canât feel,
My heart is where it shouldnât be,
And my mind doesnât matter,
With every moment my sins will shatter,
Shatter into you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10415
Posted: April 10, 2005 2:15 PM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2005 2:15 PM PDT
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