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Sophia, Lets get this over with(Rewrite) (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
I met you underneath the night sky So it shouldn't be such a surprise That you'd turn to dust with the smiling of the dawn You would have finished me And I'll need that, Just to hold my hand above my head So that I can drive home This finishing blow I'll resist your every charm, Because I have to Like so many before me I don't wanna die So come for me tonight I'll be waiting with weapons, Do you think you can disarm me with your smile? In case you haven't noticed, I'm on to you So let's dance, I brought my wooden dagger I've drank my courage, and have a smoke ready Come, let's dance, with flames and silhouettes You got me once, twice, third time is the charm Viper, Your venom won't strike home tonight I am basking in the porch-light, eyes aimed out With a locked door pressed against my back lets get this over with I don't wanna die But to end this, I'll stand ready.


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.8
Weighted score: 5.3337684
Overall Rank: 3474
Posted: April 10, 2005 11:50 AM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2005 11:50 AM PDT
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