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Sophia, Lets get this over with(Rewrite) (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
I met you underneath the night sky
So it shouldn't be such a surprise
That you'd turn to dust with the smiling of the dawn
You would have finished me
And I'll need that,
Just to hold my hand above my head
So that I can drive home
This finishing blow
I'll resist your every charm,
Because I have to
Like so many before me
I don't wanna die
So come for me tonight
I'll be waiting with weapons,
Do you think you can disarm me with your smile?
In case you haven't noticed,
I'm on to you
So let's dance,
I brought my wooden dagger
I've drank my courage, and have a smoke ready
Come, let's dance,
with flames and silhouettes
You got me once, twice, third time is the charm
Viper, Your venom won't strike home tonight
I am basking in the porch-light, eyes aimed out
With a locked door pressed against my back
lets get this over with
I don't wanna die
But to end this,
I'll stand ready.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.8
Weighted score: 5.3337684
Overall Rank: 3474
Posted: April 10, 2005 11:50 AM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2005 11:50 AM PDT
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