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Unfinished Warrior (Free verse) by PodPoet You return to me
An unfinished warrior
Through hazy sunshine
Of months of regret
And a sorrow all my own
You come back
Strong as ever
As if your absence
Never was
As if I never hated you
I reach out
To feel the chimera
And it is real
How long will it last?
I don't care to know
For I see something else in this now
Something more...carnal
And it states a hunger
To such a degree
And with such ferociousness
I will not reject it
Wash over me with abandon
I am an empty vessel you fill
And I will be here until you leave
For or against my will
Up the ladder:
Don't Ask, Don't Tell
Down the ladder:
The Dark Poet
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Posted: April 4, 2005 12:05 AM PDT; Last modified: April 4, 2005 12:05 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4358 Comments:
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I really like it. I really do. Don't know exactly why.