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When I Had You (Free verse) by kalikopeli
I remember the time I wanted to spend every minute of the day with you When I had you, I remenber all the times tomorrow seemed just so far away Just to see you, I'd drive by your street and pretend I took the wrong turn again If I knew you, I'd never waisted all my time proving my love was true, inspite of what you thought I'd do to you And if I knew, this then was through, Still you and I still would be cool Gone our seperate ways We'd knew this love was never here to stay But until that day, I'm never giving up on love, I just wanted to show you what I made of (Hook) Oh, baby when I had you, Baby I loved you, Put all my trust into you Did things I said I'd never do I needed you, I had to have you Wanted to wrap my legs around you Baby when I had you, I wanted more and more of you Had to hold you, My heart would bleed just to be a part of you Still want to be apart of you And I know that love was never meant to be We cross paths accordingly I look into you eyes, Feel I may fantasise Your beautiful olive like eyes If I had you (Hook 2xs)

Up the ladder: I want to sleep
Down the ladder: The Giant Geometry of Time

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8025
Posted: March 30, 2005 1:03 AM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2005 1:03 AM PST
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[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.249 | 30-Mar-05/1:58 AM | Reply
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