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natural (Free verse) by the_poetess
what if your spirit was a glass of sparkling cider and moon beams came out of your fingers and toes and what if you were never cliche, never stale always fresh as a daisy or daffodil if only my heart was made out strawberries not oranges and if only childhood was a blueberry and adulthood wasn't plain blue. have you ever heard that one song, about Julia, because I wish that I had a windy smile.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7083
Posted: March 27, 2005 5:53 PM PST; Last modified: March 27, 2005 5:54 PM PST
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[9] luzrheroguy @ 4.225.159.58 | 28-Mar-05/10:35 AM | Reply
Reminds me of my own writing style a few years ago.
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