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No Name (Free verse) by hatedestruction
what makes you ripe and high leaning so closely towards my sky deepest wishes and heartfelt hope licking deep down inside the hole faking obviously questioning air masking all the relic here lichens dream of butterflies with angel wings and dragon's eyes sickening tales of lung disease caution signs of fluid seas lapping lonely blossums foot deeply penetrating feels pretty good what do you think does this make you pink whipping cries of dolphins sighs and whilst the tantrums all must fly not too often now today tomorrow feel so good, feels so damn hollow what do you care, can I see you let me inside, I'll see what I can do flea driven pesticides of grief bless me someday with relief often cries of open eyes and skipping, floating bees little fuckers, don't you hate them don't have anything good for me stupid, lonely, obnoxious twin where'd you get in? deep within fuck let me fall upside left back to your right of nothing hell, this doesn't even remotely ryhme except for what you've done this time I'm confused, want to come in? we can sit and kiss all day blinding lights, little malfunction of the pressure of the notion I guess I'll be okay for once and laugh it up just today though does any of this make sense to you I don't think it's really hard to I could be wrong, once again like it matters if we're friends

Up the ladder: The Passing
Down the ladder: Can't we be together?

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4570
Posted: February 16, 2005 8:42 AM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2005 8:42 AM PST
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[10] zodiac @ 212.118.14.17 | 17-Feb-05/4:51 AM | Reply
Has anyone but you bothered to read or listen to this all the way to the end? -10-
[n/a] hatedestruction @ 167.196.165.141 > zodiac | 21-Feb-05/5:48 AM | Reply
i doubt it
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