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love's jealousy

by singinkygal

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Feb 2005 · 1 comment

This feeling consumes me Fire and rage fills my body I am angered and hatred springs to life Jealousy you green lucid fiend Set me free from your evil clutches Allow me to breathe again unreservedly To trust to live without fear of devastation Free me, Free me Die and let me live again

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[5] Dovina 4-Feb-05/12:57 PM Reply
A few too many words. Try scratching - love's, fills (make it fill or scratch fills my body) hatred springs to life, evil, again unreservedly, devastation.