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love's jealousy (Free verse) by singinkygal This feeling consumes me
Fire and rage fills my body
I am angered and hatred springs to life
Jealousy you green lucid fiend
Set me free from your evil clutches
Allow me to breathe again unreservedly
To trust to live without fear of devastation
Free me, Free me
Die and let me live again
Up the ladder:
The Star Of The Bum
Down the ladder:
The Plane of War
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Posted: February 4, 2005 5:14 AM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2005 5:14 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9111 Comments:
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Dovina @ 17.255.240.6
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4-Feb-05/12:57 PM
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A few too many words. Try scratching - love's, fills (make it fill or scratch fills my body) hatred springs to life, evil, again unreservedly, devastation.
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