poemranker ::An Ice Revelation by Nateislate

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Haiku № 119567

An Ice Revelation

by Nateislate

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Feb 2005 · 5 comments

Slipping on the ice Betrays her image of strength, She’s a clumsy girl

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5 comments

[8] fevriere 3-Feb-05/9:43 AM Reply
.. Hopefully this poem is more than just a (successful) experiment with line indentation.
[n/a] Nateislate › fevriere 6-Feb-05/8:33 AM Reply
Indeed. It's a haiku, too.
[8] fevriere › Nateislate 6-Feb-05/8:57 AM Reply
It is too.
[10] wilco 3-Feb-05/3:53 PM Reply
I don't think this is really ten-worthy, but I'm going to give you one just because it looks like you were hit with some retaliatory zeros for something.
[n/a] Nateislate › wilco 6-Feb-05/8:34 AM Reply
I agree, and I was. Nonetheless, the moment described was priceless.