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An Ice Revelation (Haiku) by Nateislate Slipping on the ice
Betrays her image of strength,
Sheâs a clumsy girl
Up the ladder:
Thommmn Thrrremmn
Down the ladder:
Don't Look At Me!
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Posted: February 3, 2005 9:17 AM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2005 9:17 AM PSTWeighted score: 3.729901 Overall Rank: 13529 Comments:
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fevriere @ 62.254.128.4
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3-Feb-05/9:43 AM
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.. Hopefully this poem is more than just a (successful) experiment with line indentation.
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Nateislate @ 68.51.106.137
> fevriere
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6-Feb-05/8:33 AM
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Indeed. It's a haiku, too.
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fevriere @ 62.254.128.4
> Nateislate
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6-Feb-05/8:57 AM
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It is too.
I don't think this is really ten-worthy, but I'm going to give you one just because it looks like you were hit with some retaliatory zeros for something.
I agree, and I was. Nonetheless, the moment described was priceless.
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