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Justin (Haiku) by smellycat541@
Because you are so comical, you will always put a smile on my face. Even in spite of that menstrual obstacle… when all emotions seem out of place. I know sometimes our relationship can be a trial, a result of our differing sleeping schemes. But as soon as I see your smile I know our love will eventually be like in our dreams. I want you to always have me to come to… I will allow no soul to sever us. For when I am with you, my heart makes not one fuss.


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 5.2682066
Overall Rank: 3926
Posted: January 10, 2005 1:12 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2005 1:12 PM PST
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[9] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51 | 11-Jan-05/2:42 PM | Reply
silly, cute. have a nine.
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