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Empty Expressions, Watching You (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17
Empty eyes Watching, but not seeing. Everywhere you go, They follow. Staring, straight through you, Transparent as glass. Empty minds Lurking, around every corner Listening, but not hearing. Judging, without considering. Their assumptions, Illogical. Empty souls Wandering, through the streets Reaching, but not touching. Hands waving, Without moving. Their gestures, Meaningless. Empty smiles Haunting, your dreams. Tearing down defenses, Without a second thought. The Cheshire Cat, could only be So deceitful. Empty expressions Filling your glass Reflected, in every mirror.

Down the ladder: From Miles Away

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6451
Posted: January 8, 2005 2:45 PM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2005 2:46 PM PST
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[7] Shuushin @ 64.222.173.32 | 8-Jan-05/7:22 PM | Reply
Great Job.
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