poemranker ::Empty Expressions, Watching You by cuddlytiger17

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Empty Expressions, Watching You

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Jan 2005 · Edited 8 Jan 2005 · 1 comment

Empty eyes Watching, but not seeing. Everywhere you go, They follow. Staring, straight through you, Transparent as glass. Empty minds Lurking, around every corner Listening, but not hearing. Judging, without considering. Their assumptions, Illogical. Empty souls Wandering, through the streets Reaching, but not touching. Hands waving, Without moving. Their gestures, Meaningless. Empty smiles Haunting, your dreams. Tearing down defenses, Without a second thought. The Cheshire Cat, could only be So deceitful. Empty expressions Filling your glass Reflected, in every mirror.

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[7] Shuushin 8-Jan-05/7:22 PM Reply
Great Job.