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Little Girl Sue (Other) by Zalev
I knew a girl named Sue, She lived not far from here. Everyday she cried, Everyday in tears. Poor little girl Sue, She seemed to be in pain. Was she being abuse, Or was little Sue insane. I sneaked up on poor Sue, To see what she would do. But when I heard her talk, I wanted to see with who. She was talking to herself, This little girl named Sue, As she said these words, Sue was feeling blue. I am a bad girl, I made daddy leave, I should have not been born, Should have never been conceived. I'm sorry mommy, Please stop yelling. Its all my fault, Sue just kept telling. I tried hard, I tried my best. You will see, I won't be a pest. I got closer to Sue, To see what she was hiding. She had a blade poor Sue, She had just finished deciding. Before I could act, Little Sue just slit, I held her tight, But Sue had a fit. Please let me die, I'm in the way. Thats what mom tells me, Everyday. My heart broke, I couldn't breathe. My tears rolled, When I saw Sue bleed. I knew a girl named Sue, She lived not far from here. Everyday she cried, Everyday in tears. Her mother yelled at her, Sue thought she was to blame. Poor little girl named Sue, Today her life she claimed. Fly little Sue, Come fly away with me. I am the Angel of love, With me you will be free!

Up the ladder: Idle
Down the ladder: Broken Free

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8837
Posted: January 4, 2005 6:47 AM PST; Last modified: January 4, 2005 6:47 AM PST
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[8] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 4-Jan-05/9:05 AM | Reply

Good up through Verse 7. After that it gets strange.
Fix "Was she being abuse,"
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