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I walk with no road (Free verse) by kawakurdi
I walk with no road I walk without a map, a direction I go anywhere, any location I pray I would have luck You would be there Anywhere You would be there Even more astray than me Looking for a lost luck Even more astray than me Looking for a broken heart I walk without a road I walk without a map, a direction I go to any city, any town, any location I pray I would have luck This year, that year, I would meet last year! I pray I would have luck Time would have no physical track All the world would come there, anywhere And you would be there

Up the ladder: Give me something
Down the ladder: God's Angels

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11158
Posted: December 31, 2004 3:51 PM PST; Last modified: December 31, 2004 3:51 PM PST
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[4] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 1-Jan-05/1:35 PM | Reply
This could be said with 1/3 as many words and twice the impact.
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