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Counsel (Free verse) by Bobjim
One day while feeling much older, And almost in despair. A hand fell on my shoulder To assure and clear the air. Cheer up a voice said wisely Things could be so much worse. So I cheered up as advised me, And they did get much much worse.

Up the ladder: Run Material Girl
Down the ladder: You can never go back!

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5879
Posted: December 31, 2004 10:11 AM PST; Last modified: December 31, 2004 10:11 AM PST
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