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Misery (Other) by Acid_moose
My feet are damp I’m freezing and sweating I feel blind and defenseless with out my fists There are no real sounds This night is dead But I hear a growl though it’s just in my head I thought it was my mind, playing tricks on me Truly a sorry sight to find, I was revealed a mile from my home In a cold snowy field Cold, devoured, and blind In slow misery As I lay here alone, speaking in rhyme.

Up the ladder: Hands
Down the ladder: If I Were a Bird

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.5
Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11270
Posted: December 29, 2004 11:46 PM PST; Last modified: December 29, 2004 11:46 PM PST
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