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Portables (Free verse) by Shardik
His fence is high, and white Yard immaculately landscaped There are some large Pacific flowers Growing to the sky off of the back patio He listens to his portable radio In the sun, I wonder, what station? Sounds like a shortwave, Remotely Japanese.

Up the ladder: III

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5164
Posted: December 28, 2004 2:45 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2004 2:45 PM PST
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[9] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 28-Dec-04/5:54 PM | Reply
Probably some bonsai and orchads too. Probably third generation American.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 > Dovina | 28-Dec-04/6:06 PM | Reply
Good guess.
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