poemranker ::Upon a Wooden Cross by wolfinaunicornsuit

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Upon a Wooden Cross

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Dec 2004 · 1 comment

That society has nailed me up Upon Revenge’s door I’ve been the rug That greets most fervidly, but never is allowed to enter Engrained with soot that foot hath drug Their soles were always center And I, the outskirts, two-dimensional pup I, the martyr on the cross who dies when no one sees A victim of maturity, I weep like the melting willow Holes in soles, attention spanned longer, yet thinner A drifting mind makes even the tiger mellow Satan, too, turns on the most loquacious sinner A hole-y Algernon among oaken trees

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[5] Dovina 23-Dec-04/5:54 PM Reply

You've lost me here. Except for a few glimmers, I'm looking into darkness. What's going on?