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Upon a Wooden Cross (Free verse) by wolfinaunicornsuit
That society has nailed me up
Upon Revengeâs door Iâve been the rug
That greets most fervidly, but never is allowed to enter
Engrained with soot that foot hath drug
Their soles were always center
And I, the outskirts, two-dimensional pup
I, the martyr on the cross who dies when no one sees
A victim of maturity, I weep like the melting willow
Holes in soles, attention spanned longer, yet thinner
A drifting mind makes even the tiger mellow
Satan, too, turns on the most loquacious sinner
A hole-y Algernon among oaken trees
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9980
Posted: December 23, 2004 2:33 PM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2004 2:33 PM PST
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You've lost me here. Except for a few glimmers, I'm looking into darkness. What's going on?