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Free verse № 116562

Oh well, shit happens

by sir_heff

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Dec 2004 · Edited 26 Dec 2004 · 3 comments

I want to be what you perceive As the god of gods Not just plan B It makes it real hard To look in your eyes Especially when I see him on the other side But I want to be there for you As a friend, un-bias But that’s hard to do when I can’t stop crying I tell you its ok, I don’t mind Which I guess I don’t But I’m still not fine Its not who he is that hurts me so Just that he is sitting on my throne Fuck it, I’ll just sit here and smoke a bowl

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[5] Dovina 14-Dec-04/10:41 AM Reply
How can a friend be un-bias (unbiased)?
Do you mean to call her a witch?
[0] Lifeboatman 27-Dec-04/4:01 AM Reply
insecure.. and I am picking up a fight.. 0
[5] Dovina 27-Dec-04/2:40 PM Reply
You still like "un-bias"????
It's worth more than 0, but give up on becoming her god of gods. I wouldn't wish that on any man.