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Oh well, shit happens (Free verse) by sir_heff
I want to be what you perceive As the god of gods Not just plan B It makes it real hard To look in your eyes Especially when I see him on the other side But I want to be there for you As a friend, un-bias But that’s hard to do when I can’t stop crying I tell you its ok, I don’t mind Which I guess I don’t But I’m still not fine Its not who he is that hurts me so Just that he is sitting on my throne Fuck it, I’ll just sit here and smoke a bowl

Up the ladder: Never Mind
Down the ladder: Once Sought

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.6666666
Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12522
Posted: December 14, 2004 10:33 AM PST; Last modified: December 26, 2004 1:57 PM PST
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Comments:
[5] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 14-Dec-04/10:41 AM | Reply
How can a friend be un-bias (unbiased)?
Do you mean to call her a witch?
[0] Lifeboatman @ 203.104.94.2 | 27-Dec-04/4:01 AM | Reply
insecure.. and I am picking up a fight.. 0
[5] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 27-Dec-04/2:40 PM | Reply
You still like "un-bias"????
It's worth more than 0, but give up on becoming her god of gods. I wouldn't wish that on any man.
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