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The Betrayal of My Mind (Ode) by blindwriter
Fortune tellers breathe the toxins
Breath the toxic air of me
I pay the cybil psychics well
To warn my family
Nothing now or ever will
Return to me complete
Pressing buttons rearranged
Sucking on a sour treat
Plethoras of common things
Running through a wire
The smart and tactful cells of me
Outnumbered by the liars.
Retreating onto common ground
Breaking it in two
True intents distorted, then
Expressing them to you.
Little I accomplish
My hands have tired of flailing
Common sense has reached your station
I was on the railing.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7935
Posted: November 20, 2004 3:16 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2004 3:16 AM PST
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