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The Betrayal of My Mind (Ode) by blindwriter
Fortune tellers breathe the toxins Breath the toxic air of me I pay the cybil psychics well To warn my family Nothing now or ever will Return to me complete Pressing buttons rearranged Sucking on a sour treat Plethoras of common things Running through a wire The smart and tactful cells of me Outnumbered by the liars. Retreating onto common ground Breaking it in two True intents distorted, then Expressing them to you. Little I accomplish My hands have tired of flailing Common sense has reached your station I was on the railing.

Up the ladder: Hopeless shelter
Down the ladder: Laughing

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7935
Posted: November 20, 2004 3:16 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2004 3:16 AM PST
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