poemranker ::Intersection by D. $ Fontera

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Free verse № 115854

Intersection

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 Nov 2004 · Edited 31 Jul 2005 · 1 comment

Stop To peer at the greying, Stolid faces Hand-baskets scooting In rows to carry them away To their own personal hells Exhaust saturating senses Senses of want; of color It is all apparent Mothers lean out of windows To catch the world In fleeting pieces Boys young and younger Dreaming to be heroes, Lovers, and rebels The chance that might Be, vanished as the light turns Red to green and back again

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[9] Dovina 1-Aug-05/8:45 AM Reply
If we all followed your advice in the first verse, we'd do better. Good;